25.12.2019 at 07:20
Editing is good, but the story telling of your edit felt lacking to me. The song is talking about wanting to get someone out of the friend zone. Why not build some sexual tension with the first verse by showing no sex, but focusing on obvious attraction between people? By the second chorus, bring in the hardcore. The song builds that way, and it's a much better experience if the visuals build that way too.